This is quite lovely. I actually like the sketchy. And it's no big deal if Sokka looks girlier than Yue, my friend (whose love of Sokka is only eclipsed by her love of Iroh) says Sokka hasn't had a single girlfriend prettier than he is.
Since you say critiques are welcome I'm just going to say the dip just before the bridge of Sokka's nose and the bridge of his nose itself needs to come out a little bit more. His brow is a little short there. I always find it helpful to draw both entire faces when drawing people kissing, and then erase the overlapped bits, so that I have the right proportion.
Thanks for the advice on Sokka's profile -- I do generally draw everything in and then erase later, like you said, when doing kisses. I'll redraw the profile in the next draft and try to tweak it.
And, well, I'm a confessed Sokka fangirl. XD But I do think Yue is very lovely, and I want to draw just here eventually, because she has such a nice character design.
Again, thanks so much for the very helpful feedback!
And yes, this is a draft. I hope to keep improving it and eventually turn it into a finished piece, possibly adding in torsos and hopefully a background. I hope you enjoy that when I finish it!
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this is like awesome
and cute ^_^
better kissing than i could draw... yeah.. i'm gone
-poof-
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...i love cows... i want a picture with a cow!!1
Since you say critiques are welcome I'm just going to say the dip just before the bridge of Sokka's nose and the bridge of his nose itself needs to come out a little bit more. His brow is a little short there. I always find it helpful to draw both entire faces when drawing people kissing, and then erase the overlapped bits, so that I have the right proportion.
Thanks for the advice on Sokka's profile -- I do generally draw everything in and then erase later, like you said, when doing kisses. I'll redraw the profile in the next draft and try to tweak it.
And, well, I'm a confessed Sokka fangirl. XD But I do think Yue is very lovely, and I want to draw just here eventually, because she has such a nice character design.
Again, thanks so much for the very helpful feedback!
And yes, this is a draft. I hope to keep improving it and eventually turn it into a finished piece, possibly adding in torsos and hopefully a background. I hope you enjoy that when I finish it!
Don't be silly, this does the couple justice very well, and I'm still getting over the fact that this was a doodle.
*favs*
^-^
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Oh, and I do love this couple so much! They were so weet!
And thanks for the
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